My Poetry: Second Chances

Everybody gets a second chance. The person or a loved one changes inside sometimes in life, the change outside doesn’t matter, it’s the inside that does. Inside of what they feel makes you wonder if they really need you or not. A lot of  people ask themselves this question, “Is it true?” I don’t care on the outside but o  the inside………..

I DO!!!

By: The Unknown Me

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One thought on “My Poetry: Second Chances

  1. I like the idea behind this one. But, other ideas I feel are fuzzy. If I might make a few suggestions:

    Don’t write stuff just to rhyme.

    First, just writing without care, or how ever you want to.

    Then, edit for purpose.

    Then, edit for rhyme and rhythm.

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